Friday, September 11, 2020

Ballade - Rainy Season Comments

Rating: 5.0

With a ripple of raindrops and a tinkle of stares,
The thirsty earth soaks the water in alacrity,
Southern winds carry some clouds and glares
Heat waves disappears from the vicinity
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 15 September 2020

DJ liked the rainy season poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2020

A beautiful Ballade ion Rainy Season has been so nicely and impressively delineated by you. The beginning two lines say about the downfall of raindrops and soaking of thirsty earth so beautifully. It may be cited....With a ripple of raindrops and a tinkle of stares, The thirsty earth soaks the water in alacrity, Gorgeous work.10

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Zuzu Mutairi 11 September 2020

Excellent poem. The rivers grow to steam stage in rapidity, While the ocean embraces the river and rains upright, Animals, take shelter under the plant as charity Heat waves disappears from the Sight!

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T Rajan Evol 11 September 2020

Very well written ballad on rainy season. I enjoyed it.10

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