Sunday, October 7, 2012

Ballad To The Queen Of My Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

save me a seat at the opera of your heatbeat,
let it fill the canyons of my ears;
with troughs and crests of deep pulses.
attenuate the beat of my heart until with yours it will finally resonate.
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Ndeipanda Aindongo
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Chinedu Dike 30 July 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned from the heart in poetic diction. The use of scientific terminologies to drive home your conviction is quite appropriate and poetically remarkable. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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