Sunday, November 23, 2008

Ballad To Just Another Falling Star Comments

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Please
keep your eyes open
So you can see
Another falling star
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Aldo Kraas
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Colleen Courtney 04 July 2014

I really like this little poem, but I feel the need to make the correction that you should have used the word tonight instead of today. I think it would be very hard to catch a glimpse of a falling star in the daylight.......

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Aldo Kraas

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