Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Ballad Of The Power Couple Comments

Rating: 5.0

She's the first thing I see when I wake

She's the last thing I see when I go to sleep
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Bri Edwards 18 December 2012

you big silly! ! you gave your secret away. there are too many parts of this i especially enjoyed! ! ! i think tonight MY wife feels like throwing ME out the window. luckily she is sleeping now in the other room. how about a mention of george burns and gracy allen (not sure how she spelled her names) ? bravo if this is a true story. bravo if it isn't also. ok Yoni, now YOU go on my 'mypoetlist. thanks for the ride. bri

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Jennifer Whitney 02 June 2010

I like the way you describe your adoration for one another. It makes me loook at my marriage with renewed twitterpation. Seriously, though, I find the poem to be sweet, endearing, and really a great way to capture love when it's young or sweetest.

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Yoni Assis

Yoni Assis

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