Tuesday, May 2, 2006

Ballad Of The Canyon Comments

Rating: 4.9

The late afternoon was a scorching inferno
The cowboy drooped lazily down in his seat,
The high painted walls of the canyon rose steeply
Baking the earth in the sweltering heat;
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Linda Ori
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karen bastin 13 January 2015

So beautifully written that I could imagine myself on that old horse. Thank you for sharing your poem . 😊

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karen bastin 13 January 2015

So beautifully written, I felt as if U was riding that old horse.

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David Harris 25 February 2007

Linda, this is one of the most beautiful ballad poems I have read in a long time. I agree that the music from Marty Robbins' El Paso fits this piece very well. Everything Country attracts me like a magnet. I belong to a western re-enactment group over here in England. On Saturday nights we gather around an open fire and sing songs like El Paso until the early hours of the morning. I gave this a big 10 because I think it deserves it. Loved it. David

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Not a member No 4 06 January 2007

Just been singing your song! Extremely well written lyrics. Perfect for the tune. You've obviously written songs before! ! ? This is such a change of direction that I'm mouth-slapped. XX jim

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jack russell 14 September 2006

And a fine, if ultimately sad, ballad it is too :) I wouldn't have minded the cowboy falling...but the horse, after all that work? Shame for a four legged friend. An easy and punchy read, Linda :) Best wishes. Jack.

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Sid John Gardner. 08 May 2006

Nice one Linda.Im a sucker for the 'Old cow hand from the Rio Grande' sentiment.A Cowboy fan for ever.Good write.Next stop 'Painted Valley'. Sid John.xx

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Who was that masked man? Super Piece, Nurse Linda...Make for some helluva Ballad(lyrically speaking) But as a Verse for Literary Consumption & Savor--THE BIG TENAMUNDO! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R..~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Danny Reynolds 02 May 2006

Clippetty-clop Don't ever stop. Danny (10)

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