The late afternoon was a scorching inferno
The cowboy drooped lazily down in his seat,
The high painted walls of the canyon rose steeply
Baking the earth in the sweltering heat;
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So beautifully written, I felt as if U was riding that old horse.
Linda, this is one of the most beautiful ballad poems I have read in a long time. I agree that the music from Marty Robbins' El Paso fits this piece very well. Everything Country attracts me like a magnet. I belong to a western re-enactment group over here in England. On Saturday nights we gather around an open fire and sing songs like El Paso until the early hours of the morning. I gave this a big 10 because I think it deserves it. Loved it. David
Just been singing your song! Extremely well written lyrics. Perfect for the tune. You've obviously written songs before! ! ? This is such a change of direction that I'm mouth-slapped. XX jim
And a fine, if ultimately sad, ballad it is too :) I wouldn't have minded the cowboy falling...but the horse, after all that work? Shame for a four legged friend. An easy and punchy read, Linda :) Best wishes. Jack.
Nice one Linda.Im a sucker for the 'Old cow hand from the Rio Grande' sentiment.A Cowboy fan for ever.Good write.Next stop 'Painted Valley'. Sid John.xx
Who was that masked man? Super Piece, Nurse Linda...Make for some helluva Ballad(lyrically speaking) But as a Verse for Literary Consumption & Savor--THE BIG TENAMUNDO! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R..~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
So beautifully written that I could imagine myself on that old horse. Thank you for sharing your poem . 😊