Saturday, October 3, 2009

Ballad No.12 Comments

Rating: 5.0

He trashed
Then bagged me
Soon after
I was sent Standing
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Quin Faas
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Under A Microscope 17 October 2009

short and yet said all there needed to be said. A story within a few lines. Nice poem.

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Patrick McFarland 10 October 2009

Sounds like you got even Quin. Nice poem. Love the title. 10

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Spiritwind Wood 09 October 2009

i really love your work, deep, dark-i feel it..even though its short-10

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Raymond Rivera 06 October 2009

Guys are wretched beasts. Women deserve more respect. This is a sad reality check... Very good poem.

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Short but satuated with service significant showing the maturity of giving to terrible takers.

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