Monday, November 2, 2009

Ballad 3 Comments

Rating: 5.0

no prayer this dream wherewith your love was chilled
while through your spirit the innocent question thrilled
in Gerbera daisy they have heard angels speak
hardest to harder when Destiny's pulleys creak
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Noel Horlanda 11 November 2009

the description of each subject is well entrenched, perfectly sewed into the hearts of readers...excellent!

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Mohammed Albalushi 06 November 2009

nice rhymes, thanks for sharing

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 06 November 2009

Another ballad of end rhymes that changes its sound line after...so soothing to the ear. a10

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Omar Ibrahim 06 November 2009

you share with us pearls while other ones put their verses in books and sell them expensively! .....i see you write for poetry not for money and that's good from you....you are what we call the real friend..

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 05 November 2009

wow! it; s amazing!

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Carol Gall 04 November 2009

this inspires gives hope 10

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Ramesh T A 03 November 2009

Rich poetic ballads transport one to the world of fantasy never to return to the world of us! Wonderful poetic pieces make one enjoy pleasure immeasurable by any standard, you see!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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