no prayer this dream wherewith your love was chilled
while through your spirit the innocent question thrilled
in Gerbera daisy they have heard angels speak
hardest to harder when Destiny's pulleys creak
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Another ballad of end rhymes that changes its sound line after...so soothing to the ear. a10
you share with us pearls while other ones put their verses in books and sell them expensively! .....i see you write for poetry not for money and that's good from you....you are what we call the real friend..
Rich poetic ballads transport one to the world of fantasy never to return to the world of us! Wonderful poetic pieces make one enjoy pleasure immeasurable by any standard, you see!
the description of each subject is well entrenched, perfectly sewed into the hearts of readers...excellent!