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Your imagination is takes the reader to another word that's so beautiful. a 10

another one! ....better and better....beautiful more than beautiful....where is the other by10 colliet?

beautiful imaginative verses and meaningful content....nice work.....10

you better watch the last 2 lines in the first stanza, ending words flowers and deeds does not fit the smoothness of the flow.but fits the thought of what the author wants to say. Nevertheless the entire structure is OK.

very well constructed.

last line just put everything in perspective 10

Dreamy words flow from your gifted pen - - 10 + + Fay