Ballad 10 Comments

Real flow of a Ballad, Nice job dear poet 10+

wow my dear your poetry is spell binding....awesome work...well crafted poem...10

Beautiful poetry my friend....each ballad challenges the other, they just get better.

aye! fill me with poetry! old but modern.....at the past but now.....english but indonesian...God bless you!

All the ballads you have penned are wonderful, the lyrics are adorable.

i have now finished commenting on all of your latest 10 ballads. They are all good!

As requested I have read all the Ballads today! I can see that you are on a great writing spree! Good creative writing! 10! You may like to add foot notes in some places for better appreciation by the readers. Best Wishes, -Raj

Good efforts made to write these ballads

'Bend me to time's sparkle way ' lovely phrasing used throughout - - 10 Fay