Ball Of Fire Comments

Another brilliant piece with a romantic touch. Rhyme and rhythm flawless.Traditional poets like me are proud of you!

I liked this poem very much, wonderful subject matter and use of imagery. Andrew x

I'll join in this lovely hymn, Ernestine, for I similarly languish for its fire. Lovely. Susie xx.

This is a lovely portrait work Ernestine. You handle rhyme very well and avoid being sugary about it. I like the celebration of a new begining. The optimism is infectuous.

in the words of George Harrison, here comes the sun and I say, it's alright.

The beauty in your words, maybe warmth enough, we can only lay back in their shine and admire Love Duncan X