Thursday, January 15, 2009

Balinese Danse Macabre Comments

Rating: 5.0

Red faced dancers on artful bowed legs
Gold tipped fingers on an upward tilt
Wide eyed but expressionless
Beckoning with uncertain malice
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Eddie Roa
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Linda Hepner 22 January 2009

Your descriptions mount and mount and fill me with horror. What a plea for an end to senseless killing. Powerful visuals, Eddie.

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Eddie Roa 15 January 2009

Thanks for the nice comments. Glad you like it.

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LOVEFOOL Aka 15 January 2009

Good deep powerful poetry thanks

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Ric Bastasa 15 January 2009

marvelous poem.. mesmerized me from line one till the end.. good work ed..

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Eddie Roa

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