Monday, October 20, 2008

Balcony Comments

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I stand at my balcony
Where the stream
Merrily rushes by
In the distance
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Reshma Ramesh
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Sadiqullah Khan 22 October 2008

A wish so dear When arms in arms The aroma of your bosom The satins and the silks Woven on your chest Like a cloth black In motifs of love By the girl in her youth The shepherdess I searched universe Your love is like The opiate of my imagination In addiction my love For the red poppy Your memory is Like the face of Marry Your beauty is Like the hand of Jesus Wake me up For now I have fallen Opened have thou The mysteries of my being You say This is another beginning

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Anjali Sinha 20 October 2008

hey resh, soooooooo beautiful Sadiq must be thrilled to read this Yes the whole of nature smiles with you when Sadiq in your arms A++++and 10+++ lovesssssssss anju

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Kee Thampi 20 October 2008

faint dream in words, the poet makes wonderful imageries These loving words Tenderly in my ears. The day my love, You are in my arms Will be the day the Flowers will bloom In my Balcony..... a new the sky and moon emerging to our heart

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Reshma Ramesh

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