Balancing Comments
I have come
Yet I have not come
I may not come any day
When I have come
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Oh! What a wonderful thought? As my fate hang in balance.....void.I love this.
True love! Love and dreams. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
In-decisive hearts outcry for the love is beautifully penned in poetic lines dear mam!
In-decisive hearts out cry is beautifully penned in poetic lines dear Mam!
The oscillation of a heart between decision and indecision......unable to decide if he/she is in real love or not! This dilemma is powerfully presented!
The intensity of love and its absence is well put.Thank you.
Coming and filling with love expresses deep emotion in each line of this poem. Still many promises are there to fill new promises., Mind awakes with strength with wonderful vision and nice presentation. Really very interesting poem.
Beautiful craft of expressing poetic oscillation. Good indeed. Thanks.
Thank you all for adding your great thoughts by their valuable comments.Yes, balancing is the golden mean path to keep floating on life.
Truth is null and void while balancing life to the shore of life
A critic how can fill his truth on this poem the filling of love is done first and the mean time you left some vacant space for your promises. If your space which you left have something in womb then the love which you filled is beautiful. still we have hopes on promises. Otherwise the other side who waiting for this will end his gifted days in unconscious mood nice to read
Loved your comment.Yes promises are synonymous with hopes.Without any promise, there can't be any hope.There comes the role of fate.Thanks for your comments
the tricky business of balancing between love and void is written as a beautiful poem..Nice to read..
It is wonderful to read your comments.Yes balancing is a tricky business.There are many situations in life when you oscillate between yes and no
What a beautiful drop! ! Sometimes life put you at a cross road where taking decision become tough.Loved it.
As I may not come As my fate Hangs in balance Between love and void...... so nicely envisioned. A poem of stunning composition I like most. Thanks for sharing. ..... 10
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9/17/2025 2:39:38 AM # 1.0.0
Nice poem on love and promise.....10