Balance Within Comments

we must be balanced within to accept the falls when they come. the need to pick up and go on is a must. nice writing

the more rough things get, more the reward,

A life is about give and take, success and failure, love and loss. Its the attitude you have towards it all that makes it work in your favor. great poem, just the right length, with rhymes that work and make it flow really well

there are some things abou your give them so much beauty and these you won't keep to yourself alone. My friend the world need your poems.

good poem!

Splendid.A sound advice and well-written.

No matter how rough things might get We get rewards for the risks we take, inspiring words

In one word, FANTASTIC. In one phrase, A DRUG FOR THE ILL SOUL. And in one sentence, IT'S THE ENERGY ONE NEEDS TO GET TO ACCELERATE ONE'S RESURRECTION FROM THE LAND OF THE DEAD. Thank you for writing this Aqeb.

I love this poem. Its really Wonderful. my friend was like 'Dude hes a petter poet that you' im like dude.....I KNOW! lol

Wo0o0o0o0o0o0w wonderful, , it takes me to the life I want to live really so wonderful! .. And I love the part that u say 'The one's you heart will always stay So don't throw life out your doorway, Life's too short and it's too real Sometimes it's hard to see and feel' so wonderful my friend as usual :)

Beautiful poem! I am excited to read more from you!

Great message included as always...what i can say more..you deserve all compliments from us..they all speak that already what i can say..Enjoyed and bring some more good works_Unwritten Soul

life will be more easy if we balance every thing in our life, i like this poem and the way show the meaning of the balance +10

Once again Aqeb, you've amazed me! This one has it all: Definition, balance, rythm, and great insight! Keep doing your thing!

thank you for teaching not to give up this is also my most favorite ur really talented

i have thought all of this, again very relatable and very good, correct me its great i enjoy this piece of yours, hope theres more 2 come

Very positive...Hope in Faith, Living a simple way of life - not too egoistic nor too altruistic...Keeping an equal balance in life...This piece I Like A LOT! ! probably one of your best so far...this wins a trophy.

brings me to thoughts... Evaluation of my life's situation and living.

Lots of deep thought went into this fine poem! Constance

Very nice poem. Life should be balanced. I like it. Even your comments about othwer poet's poetry are so transparent and good, One of your comments forced me to come to your page, Pl read my poem 'Dual aspect' and 'Voice of Poet' also. Thanks