Sunday, February 19, 2017

Balance & Tolerance In Advance Comments

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Keep your jeep, trip and pip
To yourself for I'm tired of tied treasures
That lie ahead as my head and bed weep
Meanwhile when no file of smiles for miles measures
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John Sensele
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Sylvaonyema Uba 19 February 2017

Well written in a quatrain of 4 stanzas. Effective use of the alternate rhyme scheme pattern. Sylva

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