Saturday, June 7, 2014

Balance Sheet Of A Punishment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hey..., hey you scalawag, the demon faced culprit
Stealing in again, again and again to rob poor kitties' bit
Wait, I let you learn a lesson, lest you site here again
Here...... take it, baaa.....ng...........you rotten mutt.........
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Robert Melliard 10 June 2014

I have read several of your recent poems and I especially like Balance Sheet of a Punishment. I find it very vivid as well as deep (the latter being a characteristic of all the poems I read) , Please continue to read some of my work and comment if you have time.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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