Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Balance Comments

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Balance of intuition graces beings of talent with
untoward recognition, searing events into synapses
of memory.
Relegating imagery and rhythm to upper echelons of
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Cleveland Gibson 14 January 2014

It is short and I feel you are trying too hard. In my Opinion.In each sentence what is the subject and what is the action? Only a thought to ponder over.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 January 2014

stillness of silence, I like it, thanks.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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