Thursday, November 18, 2010

Balance Comments

Rating: 3.5

Heart and mind conflict inside
As I sit in the corner - terrified
No place to run, no place to hide
I watch as yin and yang collide
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Jacob Clark 25 February 2012

This is an interesting poem. I love the way you've personified the heart and the mind. Your poem is refreshing and new, though it is written on a subject which has already been written on extensively.

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