Friday, November 2, 2007

Balance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Started as Cinderella,
Filled with grace, charm,
And an umbrella.
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Blue Angel
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This story poem reminds me of somebody else, but in her case there was no love making. She wanted to do it with the one she loved, but there were lots of people around who were against that. Gossips and lies portrayed her as a monster, but she always knew who she really was, regardless what others might have thought... and that could be compared to finding ‘the peace of self’. Again I love the last stanza most. This is very well written Blue Angel - real pleasure to read and review :)

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