Baking Days And Restless Nights … 2506-2k12 Comments

I found this most interesting as you had laid down a patter was as a relentless train, which im guessing would be your intention, the other thing that interested me as lets face it i review to improve my writing skills but i liked how you completed many lines with quite regular completion words yet non of this was predictable...fine piece saadat

What should i said here all already taken by fellow poets, just to say hey the rhyme is so cool.... anyway since Eid is coming for you, soon Baking cake and restless stomach i know u will yum yum yum Joking! the serious message is always you, personal and important..very well done_SOul

A really great write, brilliant rhyming.

Deep and Powerful! A reservoir of great rhymes and rich imagery! Beautifully crafted and thought provoking! 10+++ I truly enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing my dear brother and keep it up! The Almighty Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

The misery of the distressed people is depicted with superb word play and rhythm. Impressive indeed.

I clutch my tummy and want to sup. Wish I'd slept and not woken up. When are we going to see the dawn? The situation of economically deprived people is well described here!