Thursday, April 11, 2013

Baking Comments

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She bakes for him a birthday cake;
(As if my mind was not awake)
I ascend the stairs, she’s on the phone;
(Awkwardly, she changes tone)
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David McLansky
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 11 April 2013

mask and mask no one willin to open though people has nose to smell /baking nowadays i hope in almost all family///thanx a nice poem read mine i will not let you alone, i will make a graveyard, o my almighty nice feel to vote

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Gajanan Mishra 11 April 2013

we are in need of love, pure love. thanks.

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