Saturday, October 18, 2008

Bail My Feelings Comments

Rating: 5.0

My pen can’t write,
Feelings on my paper.
My heart and mind fight,
To find words to display;
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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tara star 13 May 2009

beautiful poem indeed....feelings r only felt not expressed.....well done

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Wojja Fink 22 April 2009

when wandering mind returns to rest it seems your poems are then expressed......thank you for the reminder......John

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Simran Sanganeria 10 April 2009

u r a true poet....your poems r so soothing n sweet...m gonna read all ur poems

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Aijaz Asif 06 November 2008

yes it happens sometimes when heart wants to write something and mind wonders around somewhere else, you realy penned the feelings wellin this short and beautiful poem....10 rgds asif

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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