Bags Of Next Door Comments

A Terrific Poem! Wonderful imagery and more!

Now this is something else Kev. - this is the real nitty-gritty of excellence. Well thought through, but what a poetic take on the ordinary everyday subject.! The reader has to think and then begin to see the scene emerging, with brilliance in word choice and line.... this is going with me into my favourites. It deserves more than my ten. from Fay.

awesome, don't know what else to say, great stuff. ben