Wednesday, May 30, 2007

Baggage Comments

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I will carry yours for you,
if you dare carry mine for me,
who says that is all there is,
and all points in between ?
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Barry Van Allen
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Diane Violet 02 June 2007

Baggage, we can stow it, stuff it, put a lock on it but if we think it won't affect the future we're only fooling ourselves... sharing the load and understanding each others load......well Barry your poem says it! ! ! ..................................Diane

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Dee Daffodil 30 May 2007

Wow...This is so funny to me...not funny haha, but funny...in that...I occasionally think of myself as a baggage handler. I deal with people all the time...and I have never found anyone yet, who doesn't at least have a small handbag with them on the train of life. I take their baggage, and show them where and how to safely store it, and then help them back on the train of life, so that they may continue on their trip. It's what I do...it's likely...what I have always done (well, since I was about 18 anyway...) So...I understand your poem...very well indeed! Hugs, dee

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