Friday, February 10, 2017

Baffling Lightness Of Being Comments

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A novel I read said you live then you're dead
and that lightness of being's unbearable.
But wantonness led to commitment instead,
so perhaps its intention was parable.
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Harley White
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Bill Cantrell 10 February 2017

You do have a way with complexities in your poetry, and you so gracefully throw in the human element, your poem is outstanding and fascinating, personally, I think black holes are necessary to a functioning galaxy, I think they are the heart, engine, gyroscope that gives equilibrium to ours as well as other galaxies, even when they collide...the two become one and order is achieved in the long run.

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Harley White 10 February 2017

I genuinely appreciate your response to my poem and that you recognized what I was trying to achieve in it. And, yes, black holes do seem to be an integral part of galaxies... and yet, there are still so many mysteries. I am, for instance, intrigued by M-Theory, and I have a poem posted here called M-Theory Musings written some years ago, if you wish to take a look...

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