Saturday, February 16, 2008

Badly-Sewn Doll Comments

Rating: 3.3

I have tried and tried and goddammit, I can't figure it out
Because who I am is hidden to even myself
I wear the pale, pink skin of my French mother
And the black hair and eyes of my Navajo father
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Laura Kiernan
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Greenwolfe 1962 17 February 2008

I'm a 'Rhythm and Rhyme' poet so I don't consider this poetry but rather prose. It is good prose, however. If you don't keep a diary, you should. Write down every odd look or experience you have and someday you can publish a book about it. This will allow you to reach your goal. Now, I will write you a private message. GW62

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Duncan Wyllie 16 February 2008

I feel the seams sewing up and what is made is *BEAUTIFUL* Love duncan X

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Laura Kiernan

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