Monday, August 12, 2019

ਬਾੱਡਰ ਆਲ਼ਾ ਸ਼ਾਯਰ ੧(Badder Ala Shayar1) Comments

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ਕੱਲ੍ਹ ਚਰੀ 'ਚ ਤੋਤੇ ਬੈਠੇ ਸੀ
ਕਈ ਖਾਂਦੇ ਸੀ, ਕਈ ਗਾਉਂਦੇ ਸੀ,
ਮੇਰੀ ਖਡ਼-ਖਡ਼ ਸੁਣ ਕੇ ਉੱਡ ਗਏ।
ਇਹ ਵੇਖ ਚੀੰਨਾ ਵੀ ਤਾਰੋਂ ਪਾਰ ਗਿਆ,
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Jagdish Singh Ramana
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Jazib Kamalvi 13 August 2019

Modern style indeed, Jagdish gi. Thanks for sharing and inviting.

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Rajnish Manga 13 August 2019

A lovely piece of poetry. Being a native of a border village has its advantage as well as disadvantage for the residents. But birds do not recognise any restrictions on cross-border movements between two countries. You have a very mature style of writing, Jagdish ji. Thanks for sharing the poem, providing transcript and fairly detailed Notes. The picture adds to its classic value.

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Very very thank you Sir for your precious review. It matters a lot and inspire as well.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 August 2019

chriya chuk jaan gee sarah kuchh peace pyar sari lalsa jsr kee karenga tuu u good

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Jagdish Singh Ramana

Jagdish Singh Ramana

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