Friday, July 14, 2006

Bad Spirits Comments

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From a bottle of gin,
you'll get the devil within.
He'll come out and grin,
you will never win.
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David Darbyshire
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Dee Daffodil 14 July 2006

Dave...I have to say...I sort of agree with Nalini on this one...nothing like an ice cold gin n tonic...well except maybe and ice cold beer...or an ice cold slushy margarita....Provaocative poem though! Hugs, Dee

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Nalini Hebbar 14 July 2006

have the bad booze...then the bad spirits dig your grave for you...all you need to do is lie down and play dead...and that's easy after the booze...lol...great going, dave...nalini

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Patricia Gale 14 July 2006

Oh so true! Good read, wonderful rhyme.

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