Sunday, March 6, 2016

Bad Soul Comments

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I have got a crazy soul
cause I'm fall in love
I've a strange bounce
but my mind and my heart are rock
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Daniel Brick 15 March 2017

I counted 15 repetitions of the phrase BAD SOUL, but if your purpose was to disparage yourself, it didn't work for me. I see everywhere your hidden soul beneath the visible, corruptible soul, and it is gaining strength from these conflicts in the world and preserving its precious wholeness until IT IS TIME. I see a woman who can say with Shakespeare's suffering King, I AM MORE SINNED AGAINST THAN SINNING. Isn't that amazing I can read this poem and find in it an eventual Redemption and New Life of the Soul, But I do.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 December 2016

You can still change one day. To enhance your status of your soul. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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