Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Bad Situation Comments

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I have a bad situation
i dont know what to do
i dont know how to act
im in bad situation
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David Beckham 25 August 2011

This piece I take was written at the height of such emotions. On the point of the 'Bad Situation' i'll say you have done well delivering on that theme. I love the continous use of 'bad situation' in a way it emphasizes the situation as well as offer a sort of subliminal healing-since we suppose that time does heal- having said that, the repeated use buys you time to heal. Excellent poem. Really enjoyed.10/10

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