My heart and mind are
Full of suppurating burns
And I suffer every moment
As this life takes unexpected turns
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You are feeling the sufferings from inside and we are feeling you through this poem. Bit do not worry, suffering will not last for long and joy will bloom in life soon. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned!
Nicely done and your poem takes and arrives in the right place just with 8 lines.