Monday, September 28, 2020

Bad Mood Comments

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My heart and mind are
Full of suppurating burns
And I suffer every moment
As this life takes unexpected turns
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Deluke Muwanigwa 28 September 2020

Nicely done and your poem takes and arrives in the right place just with 8 lines.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2020

You are feeling the sufferings from inside and we are feeling you through this poem. Bit do not worry, suffering will not last for long and joy will bloom in life soon. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned!

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