Bad Luck Comments

Wow, wow, wow, I can wow you the whole day

wow what a craft thank you for sharing

I really liked the last stanza Alison, specifically the last two lines for the way they rhyme and act as a stop for the piece. It's rough when we hit a bad lunch cycle. If I were you, I'd try writing it in 2nd person (using YOU instead of I or MY) and see if it becomes even more poignant. Thanks for showing it to me.