Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Bad Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

You took your love away from me
And stole the love I gave to thee
You will pretend to disagree….
I'm glad you finally set me free
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Barry Jablonski
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Chinedu Dike 02 April 2015

Lovely piece of poetry penned with insight. Love is a spiritual experience, it's also whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and sometimes may leave without warning. I like the articulation of the poem and the rhyme scheme. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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