Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Bad Judgement Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I open this book to this empty page
Prepared to fill its lines with anger and rage
But my thoughts are tangled, thin, barren threads
These words consume me locked up in my head
...
Read full text

Payyton Egerstaffer
anger courage Judgement
COMMENTS
Matthew Harrison 11 August 2009

I agreed with Adeline at first. It took me a couple of reads (worth it tho) . Definitely a potential great. The end is stretched, but I do love the delivery. It just kinda betrays the count. Love it tho.

0 0 Reply
Serenity Prayer 11 December 2008

very powerful. i feel that way bout my ex. great job! !

0 0 Reply
James Mclain 09 December 2008

Strong langauge that I enjoyed thank you.

0 0 Reply
Load More...
Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
Payyton Egerstaffer
Payyton Egerstaffer
Fort Polk, Louisiana
Poet's Page Poems More
Close Activity Quotes Biography Comments Following Followers Statistics My Profile Add New Poem Add New Quote
Poemhunter.com
 Best Poems Best Member Poems Best Classical Poems New Poems New Poets Best Member Poets Best Classical Poets Explore Poems Explore Poets Poem Of The Day
Poems About
 Love Poems Baby Poems Death Poems Sad Poems Birthday Poems Wedding Poems Nature Poems Sorry Poems Hero Poems Poetry E-Books
Best Poets
 Robert Frost Maya Angelou William Shakespeare Pablo Neruda Langston Hughes Emiliy Dickinson Shel Silverstein William Blake Rabindranath Tagore William Wordsworth
Best Poems
 Phenomenal Woman Still I Rise The Road Not Taken If You Forget Me Dreams Annabel Lee Caged Bird If Fire And Ice On The Death Of The Beloved
Poem Hunter App Store
PoemHunter Facebook PoemHunter Twitter PoemHunter Instagram
About Us Copyright notice Cookie Policy Privacy Statement Contact Us Help Report Error Is Poem Hunter a legit site? Is Poem Hunter safe? Comunity Rules Privacy Policy Legal Terms Of Use

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

7/19/2025 3:33:52 PM # 1.0.0

Close
Error Success