Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Bad Dreams Comments

Rating: 3.0

They hover in silence
over the roof tops
and descend like frost
on the grey slates,
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Noreen Carden 05 January 2014

Wow Paddy you manage to make something that should be frightening and make it beautiful i am stunned by the beauty of your words, A definite ten

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Shania K. Younce 26 December 2013

It is really quite beautiful even thoe it sounds to be a nightmare. Bien!

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Yasmin Khan 12 October 2013

You have captured a nightmare so vividly in words.

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