Sunday, March 9, 2008

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Where is all the love
I was promised when I was born
All the promises' have been broken
Now my heart bleeds becuz its ripped and torn
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Mr. Poetic
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~ Jon London ~ 07 May 2008

This is a fine write, it's important that our fallen brothers are remembered..fighting for what we believe is right, yet home life doesn't exist in the same way as it does on the field of war (no difference in any of us - No Divide) ...But back home it's just something soldiers have come a custom to except..and shouldn't have to. Great piece...thanks for sharing best wishes Jon

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