Thursday, May 17, 2007

Bad Dream #2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wind blowing papers through empty grey streets
Cement maw of an alley is gaped in a shout
Broken glass and spent bullets crunch under my feet
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Masha Danevasha
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Masha D. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Original Unknown Girl 31 May 2007

A very dark dream, can imagine waking up in a sweat to this one. You've described eloquently with much imagery here. A gripping read for sure. HG: -) xx

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Geoff Warden 23 May 2007

VERY NICLY PLACED......... I do tend to read more into it than may have been intended, but dam I love the metiforical version upon these well desurved words.........

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