Friday, September 28, 2012

Bad Day Blues Comments

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Lullaby of distortion
Woke me up,
Perfect overture for the commotion
Snags and tears piled up.
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Morawn Higgs
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Ben Paynter 26 September 2013

you've got style and rhythm...just don't try so hard to rhyme...it's not always necessary. functionality and rhythm supersedes sound.

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Chrissy Horning 28 September 2012

Awesome! Great write...feeling that one today.

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