Saturday, March 1, 2008

Bad Day Comments

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I had a bad day
Over the past few years
I’ve been getting into trouble
With those of my kind that kill
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Jade DragonHeart
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David Beckham 05 August 2010

We all have bad and good days. Thank for sharing

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Shekhar Joshi 02 March 2010

This is as gud as the original....and yeah i love it as much as i love the original..., : D

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Interesting...The first part makes me think of someone whose friends are in gangs. Second part, sounds kind of like the aftermath of a break up....Ehh, I won't go saying what I think this and that means. From an overall view, I think it was good. Yeaahh, plenty of images here and there coming to mind.

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Christy Lamb 07 April 2008

hey this is a really great poem!

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