Tuesday, October 16, 2012

Bad Company Comments

Rating: 4.8

Fatigued and exhausted home coming makes me restless
As if I am swallowed whole by the emptiness
Stacked famous ones whirl around, pity me
As termites start digesting me
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Maria Gonzalez 01 August 2015

Love the reverse etheree. Very creative. The poem is very expressive and lovely to read.

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Valsa George 02 November 2013

Another great write! Like a spiritual seeker, you seem to be after real bliss, trying to annihilate the seven deadly sins! Let your quest be crowned with success!

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Deepak Sawhney 15 September 2013

Great power of expression. Enjoyed your style of writing. Thanks.

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Wahab Abdul 07 June 2013

this is fantastic reverse etheree love it....10

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Heather Wilkins 30 May 2013

a nice poem full of hope. getting rid of bad company good idea they can pull one down with them.

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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