Give me work to do
Show me how to do it
If i fail to do it
Punish me severely.
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Your clear but simple style of writing is evident in this poem especially. Superb! Kat
you have rhythm and a flow of logic, and a clever, again, way to exress it. And not only will I not give you a bad comment, I won't beat you black and blue, either!
ha ahha i thought you were only experienced in love i never knew you could do better in this. this is absolutely lovely
a very true poem..... very heartfelt..... im starting to like all ur work now.... thanks for sharing......