Bad Beach Blues Poem by Rini Shibu

Bad Beach Blues

Rating: 4.8


Stuffy red nose and hard to breathe
Sneezing and sneezing is horrible
Didn't think of this consequence
When I spend the whole day on the beach
I want to slip into my quilt
And sleep for the whole day
Mom I miss your presence
Your care and the vapor rub
Your love and the hot chicken soup
It's miserable I am on my bed
With a cup of ginger tea.

Saturday, September 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 October 2017

OOOOO WHERE'S UR HUBBY HE SHOULD BE RUBBING HONEY SMILES ONLY NO BIKINS WOW HE MUST BE FUNNY LOVELY BEACHY SMILES EH POET

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Rini Shibu 24 October 2017

Yes he applied vapor rub.. But mothers care is different Thanks for reading

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 October 2017

WHERE'S UR HUBBY HE SHOULD BE RUBBING HONEY SMILES ONLY NO BKINS WOW HE MUST BE FUNNY LOVELY BEACHY SMLES EH POET

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 October 2017

GOSH WHERE'S UR HUBBY HE SHOULD BE RUBBING HONEY LOVELY BEACH I SEE IN SMILES AND IN BIKINIS NO! LONG INDIAN SKIRTS ONLY

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2017

Sometimes health gets disorder and it happened to you. In spite of many sneezings, lacking of care of mother you have inscribed this beautiful poem successfully, dear Rini, thanks for sharing.10

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Rini Shibu 29 September 2017

Thanks Kumar..nothing can be compared with mothers love

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2017

This consequence! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 02 September 2017

Thanks Edward for reading..

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