Bad Air Comments

Great poem with a profound metaphor and strong symmetry.

Rich in a raw rabidity reality that is reality for many. Thanks for sharing my friend.

very personal, helpless and sad, well done <3

a mysterious yet superb write..well done

The utter helplessness here feels unbearable, especially when the last line is absorbed. A very expressive and interpretive poem, a superb piece to your collection.

its a bit sad but also good