Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Backstabber Comments

Rating: 5.0

I just want to hate you,
I just want to scream,
or maybe i could just wake up,
and this could all be a dream.
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Holly Smith
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Vikky Lai 29 September 2009

Another great and effective poem. And i think i can tell erm...yeah; -) xx

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Neil Singleton 28 July 2009

wow a very intresing of rhythm in your free will i love it hunny..10++ xxx

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Irene Clark-hogg 25 July 2009

You have a nice, crisp sense of rhythm which you have used well in this poem. Very enjoyable. Irene

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Reece Lyle 22 July 2009

lol im guessing this about... never mind i love it holly :) keep it up x

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Holly Smith

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