I just want to hate you,
I just want to scream,
or maybe i could just wake up,
and this could all be a dream.
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wow a very intresing of rhythm in your free will i love it hunny..10++ xxx
You have a nice, crisp sense of rhythm which you have used well in this poem. Very enjoyable. Irene
lol im guessing this about... never mind i love it holly :) keep it up x
Another great and effective poem. And i think i can tell erm...yeah; -) xx