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I had to learn a lot from rising sun Reaching on the top without making run. That is what you've done, poetically. I'm particularly impressed by your rhymes and images thanks for sharing

Nice wording good job

Wished smooth passage and no down fall Prayed almighty not to face any distress call Childhood passed off easily under the protection Parents looked after well without my action I was lucky to have their protective shield Seeds were growing and offering high yield Horizon seemed to me vast and open Blue sky and earth were no less than heaven I could think of major leap forward life moves with time in progress under umbrella of both parents, guiding and educating...., one is lucky to have all the best in the life, and gets able to stand erect in the society.............wonderful poem

I had to learn a lot from rising sun Reaching on the top without making run Not to fall back from destiny under slight pretext It was high time to undergo vigorous test ................................ beautiful piece..beautiful lines..So inspiring to read

Beautifully landscape of poetry.....this is a poem for refreshing and for stress management.....just a ponder would mean a lot to unlock our emotional pain.....recommended for people who have no reason to pacify them selves....no reason the...Why of this world.....this would help their doubt.....thank you for sharing...and God bless you my friend a 10....and a Star

i loved ur poem it was great i give it a 10

Dear respected poet, Your poetry is exemplary I totally agree. All the best, with regards, M V VENKATARAMAN

Wonderful poem, i enjoyed reading it....10

Neither had I feared a backlash Nor attempted to make eye wash Wished smooth passage and no down fall

Neither had I feared a backlash Nor attempted to make eye wash.very good poem indeed....10

I very much enjoy reading your words. =) thanks for shareing.

Well structure poem good write

Just can say a wonderful poem.

This really captures all of the struggles that one can face during their lives. Put together very well and the rhyming scheme was well placed as well. May you be successful with publishing your memoir.

'Honest dealing without putting on mask I may suffer heavily on this count Difficulties may surface and pressure mounts' - The world at large is holding this view and it is an incorrect view. Honesty is the best policy. All of us have the concept of Honesty but the problem with us is that we expect this from the rest of the world in the first place. This will not work. The world is also expecting the same from us in the first place and do we bother to exhibit it on our own? Can we tolerate the dishonesty of our children? Can they tolerate the dishonesty of their parents? The same law applies to the whole world. It is always the best to take the initiative measures from our own side. This applies not in the case of honesty but in all of the qualities of the heart - love, kindness, empathy etc. The entire world is only in the expectation of the receipt of these and it is not bothered to give out in the first place. We need a reflection on this subject. Another thing. We are not going to learn lessons out of our setbacks and shortcomings and blows. If we can see our blows as a witness, it may be purposeful. It is just like saying that war is a must to learn the value of peace. Even without war we can remain at peace. This is the point. Even without having blows, we can lead a peaceful, dignified life. Blows are not in the material situations but in the interpretation of the situations. How we take on is most important. Our Vedanta does not say that blows are necessary to avoid blows in future. Practically we don't learn any lessons out of our blows. If then, we would have said goodbye to Harthals, Bundhs, strikes and the like very long time ago. Dalsukh S (11/8/2009 8: 38: 00 AM) Wished smooth passage and no down fall Prayed almighty not face any distress call

i don't know why but after i have seen the last verse, i remembered the saying 'blame bad luck, not yourself' anyway nice write

This poem, in a general way, speaks of the necessity of hardship and learning the lessons those hardships have for us. Thoughtful, as usual, but rather too general. Thank you, sir. If you have the time, please read 'Hospital Walls', 'My Father', 'Autumn Tree', and 'The Epileptic Fit'. Other suggestions for later: 'Billowing Rain on a Sunday', 'Thomas R. Intellect', and 'You're Lying There Still Asleep'.