Wednesday, July 1, 2020

Back Together Again Comments

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We're back together again
After many months apart
How long I felt the pain
That came right from the start
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Bri Edwards 27 September 2020

poem is good, ....as far as it goes, BUT it's " left me hanging" , wanting to hear 'the rest of the story'! reunited? remarried? or JUST slumming it together, in sin, every so often? ? does it have to do with a Star Trek episode? (a rhetorical question) bri :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 August 2020

Wow so charming and romantic, you need to make up for time lost time apart and this poem is great for a start to reunite and bond anew. You express in fab rhyming. Kudos! ! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history.

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Kim Barney 31 July 2020

Very nice poem. We all need someone to love and to love us.

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Grace Diane Jessen 05 July 2020

A lovely poem. It touched my heart. Thank you.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 01 July 2020

Very nice poem. Lots of good rhyme. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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