Yearning for all I used to love
All my thoughts going above
You could have set me free
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I Actually Like This Poem, For Some Reasons, I Think It Had A Deep Meanin Within..=]
my fav live is 'you were like my bitter pill that i had too take against my will
I really understand this one. This is really good, though I don't like some of the rhymes. They mess up the flow too much. Otherwise, a very nice poem. GW62
This is a good poem. You have some excellent lines I also liked the line (you were like my bitter pill ect) . That is a great line. This is a deep poem.