Saturday, January 17, 2009

Back To Zero *why The Hell Do So Many People Like This Poem* Weirrrrrrrrrrrrdddd Comments

Rating: 2.5

Yearning for all I used to love
All my thoughts going above

You could have set me free
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Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl
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Kevin Carney 04 August 2010

This is a good poem. You have some excellent lines I also liked the line (you were like my bitter pill ect) . That is a great line. This is a deep poem.

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Accidental Emo 06 December 2009

I Actually Like This Poem, For Some Reasons, I Think It Had A Deep Meanin Within..=]

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Tom Golding 08 February 2009

Has depth and expression i liked it a lot.

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Pilar Killen 08 February 2009

my fav live is 'you were like my bitter pill that i had too take against my will

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Kerli Undead 07 February 2009

wow, this is a deep peom, well written. ~Kerli

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 January 2009

I really understand this one. This is really good, though I don't like some of the rhymes. They mess up the flow too much. Otherwise, a very nice poem. GW62

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