Saturday, June 10, 2023

Back To You Comments

Rating: 5.0

A woodland place of all things pleasing
Soft green grass that moves with the breeze,
Those melancholy sounds, are so appealing
Of wild, free birds upon the trees.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Richard Wlodarski 13 June 2023

Reminisces of LEAVES OF GRASS. Walt Whitman would be proud. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem, Jayne.

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Thank you Richard for your lovely comment : )

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Nabakishore Dash 11 June 2023

Platonic love written brilliantly.

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Thanks for your kind comment : ) x

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Sheeya Hacks 11 June 2023

Ver well written poem. FIVE STARS

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Thank you so much Sheeys

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Thank you so much Sheeya : ) x

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Esselebor Ebhojie 10 June 2023

Nostalgic drama, I really felt connected to the grass, breeze and sunshine

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Thank you Esselebor : ) Much appreciated x

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Suzon Albert 10 June 2023

To return signifies many a things to me. Good poem, Keep writing such poems, dear.5**

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Thank you Suzon x Much appreciated.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 June 2023

Excellent piece Jayne kudos

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Thank you LeeAnn : ) I welcome your kind comments x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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