Wednesday, July 20, 2011

Back To The Mojave Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm going back for a little while,
Back to my desert sands.
In a few months I'll be like a child,
Once I see the arid lands.
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Juan Olivarez
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 20 July 2011

Great poem with a lot of depth. Fine and vivid imagery. The poem has something that makes it superb. I like and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warm regards Akmal

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