Back To Stone Age Comments

Ilike your stories they are very good.

This poem is a befitting commentary on our age and times. The man has made tremendous progress. But still the false vanity is driving us towards insanity. man v/s man, machine v/s machine and ideology v/s ideology. So much devastation and bloodshed. What for we took off from that wretched stone age?

I read a few of your poems. Your strike me as a tinker, you have the essence of a poet who sees the pain, hurts and issues that affects life, society and humanity as a whole and speak out about it in your poems. I especially like the first two stanza in Back to Stone Age. Your poems all have a particular rhythm which is good but become a bit singsong as it goes along. Also they tend to come across as just some words that rhyme because you focus on the rhyme more than anything. Look at poetic devices they can help your work. You have good potential

I think it´s even worse! We are not back to Stone Age, we never left it! Very well penned, it´s tragical that it needs to be written, though...

Very well scripted. Somebody is scripting DOOMSDAY. Yet, there is hope in this sad present.

very beautiful poem i really like it it's beautifully written 10

Let unruly rule the scene, Witness the destruction never seen, No willingness or more so keen, But part of the game though actually not been wonderful poem, very well written.........10

A few ideas present themselves here. First, you seem to be saying that, spiritually, we have not really evolved since the Stone Age. We have the same aggressive and violent tendencies. We're more dangerous now, given our sophisticated weapons and intellect. Religion is hollow now. We have many religious books, but they're either left unread, or if read, they don't ring true or resonate for many people. Religious leaders are mere politicians (perhaps they always were) . Impersonality of technology is taking over. Once again, I would have liked more concreteness in the poem, but it was still a good read.

Nice rhymes...loved it! Beautiful poem. Keep writing...

True and hitting straight in heart. Marv ellous poem sir.pls read my 'in the name of religion'..

we are going baclward....10

we are simply going back....10

what takes us back to old age? ? ? 10

going back to old era...10

There is a saying 'History repeats.' There were wars fought during Mahabharata and Ramayana eras. Now also wars are fought on a major scale. Money power and muscle power are war mongers anywhere in the world. The poem in this context speaks well.

we are resorting unusual steps...10

we are going back to old era...10

I commend you writing in English which is a difficult language to learn even for those raised in America. I must disagree with your sentiments on growth as I believe there has been much growth in all societies. There will probably always be those who wish to solve disagreements with war, but I am hopeful that humanity is becoming more enlightened and I see this by how my country has grown. Even twenty years ago it would have been impossible for us to have a mixed race president. Growth is slow but the time is here to rejoice in positive changes that are occurring all over the world. Namaste', Connie

Does religion allow shaking faith? religionforbid so many things....10

Faith now not confined to self, Confined to books and retained in shelf...we are proviong difficult...10